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Matthew Maitland's avatar

The second one has a great scheme. Flows well.

williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

I am thinking of continuing it/ it seems half-done to me

Jenni's avatar

You wrote the king so well. Loved it you play with words so nicely and effectively.

Mathew W Smith's avatar

I like the werewolf. Chilling, relatable.

Stephanie M. Vargo's avatar

I really like a werewolf. Great poem. Last few lines gave me chills.