6 Comments
User's avatar
williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

Winter was my personal favorite of the three also/ With this heat I thought a little remberance of winter might help

Bran Iberi's avatar

“Draw lots upon wishes turned to salt“ brilliant line, “…don”t look back!”

Althea Grace's avatar

Such an apt description... Born and raised in Winter Wonderland,(Michigan), I detested the cold. Living in other cold states did nothing to change that. Had to flee the country for relief 😆.

Sam Rasnake's avatar

Good poems, William. Enjoyed the read, especially Winter.

Stephanie M. Vargo's avatar

Winter is my favorite. I could feel the chill and the desolation. It was all very real to me. It made me miss the feel of winter.

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

Of the three, Winter stayed with me the longest. The physical cold gradually becomes something deeper, until it feels like a reflection of memory, hardship, and endurance rather than just the season itself.

There is a quiet intensity running through these poems that lingers after the final line. Thank you for sharing them.