That final exchange genuinely unsettled me. For a moment I couldn't tell who was creating whom anymore. I enjoy stories that leave me carrying the question long after I've finished reading.
Captures the frustration of a usual therapy session. So we are both up burning the early morning oil, except for me it's later. Coming up on 4am here in Pittsburgh-landia. Time to put down the pen. Great poem.
This is excellent! I have every reason to believe their next session will be equally productive!
Brilliantly unsettling.
The dialogue moves the piece in a swift, real fashion. Good piece. The difficulties and tension come through. I like it.
I just pretended what it would be like to introduce Elliott to my shrink
That final exchange genuinely unsettled me. For a moment I couldn't tell who was creating whom anymore. I enjoy stories that leave me carrying the question long after I've finished reading.
Thanks
Captures the frustration of a usual therapy session. So we are both up burning the early morning oil, except for me it's later. Coming up on 4am here in Pittsburgh-landia. Time to put down the pen. Great poem.